LAICOS has a new title!

11 November 2011

That’s right. A new title!

I want to talk a bit about why the book got retitled, as well as my adventurous process of finding the right one, but let me get to the goods first. (I know that’s what you want. You’re welcome.)

So without further adieu, THE LAICOS PROJECT is now…..

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TAKEN

I love this new title! It is bold and dark and mysterious. Simple but strong. Eerie and ominous. Above all, I love how it has intrigue the way LAICOS did. It makes the reader ask questions. Taken? Taken from where? When? Why?

While I’m in love with the new title, I must admit that the process of finding it was not all hugs and hearts and sunshine. Titling a book is a tricky business, and one of the first things editor Erica had told me when she first acquired my book was that it would need a new title.

In the same way that authors don’t “pick” their covers, we don’t “pick” our titles, either. This doesn’t mean that we don’t have a say in them, just that many people do. Here’s how I like to think of things: The front of a book is a piece of advertising. It is the window display of window shopping. As you’re walking down the rows at your favorite bookstore, those titles and cover art are calling to you, advertising to you. Regardless of the well known saying, people really do judge books by their covers.

There were some concerns regarding THE LAICOS PROJECT as a title, and while it still holds a dear place in my heart – it’s been the name in my documents folder for the last year and a half, after all – I understand those concerns. THE LAICOS PROJECT feels heavily sci-fi, and we didn’t want to turn off any potential readers, specifically those that tend to shy away from the genre. Also, “LAICOS” is a word that makes sense in the context of the novel, but without being rooted in the story, it holds little meaning for a reader. And say they hear about the book through a friend. Will they know how to spell the title when they search for it on amazon? See where I’m going with this?

I started brainstorming new titles back when I started my first revision (June). TAKEN was approved just this past week. It’s been a long journey (nearly five months), and I won’t lie: finding the right title for my book was hard. Really, really hard. Erica will agree. So will my agent, Sara. We went through round after round after round of options. It was extremely fun at first, coming up all those possibilities, but eventually I ran dry. I think I actually sent an email to Sara at one point, saying something along the lines of, “I have no titles left in me. Those are all the titles I know.” I sort of felt like a failure. How was it possible that I could write an 80,000 word novel and be incapable of picking the right 1-5 words to sit on its cover? But we got there. We, not I.

Renaming this book was a gigantic team effort. Erica may or may not have recruited all of HarperTeen to help. Sara’s brainstorming efforts may or may not have extended into her office, resulting in the singing of “Where Have All the Cowboys Gone” and “The Boys are Back in Town.” And in the end, I’m not even sure who first recommended TAKEN. Was it me? Someone at Harper? Did it come up in a group brainstorm? I truthfully can’t remember. I met Erica the other day (for the first time ever! Yay!) and even she wasn’t certain.

But you know what? I don’t care. We found the title and I love it! It is the result of stubborn persistence, a mountain of patience, an endless supply of positivity, and dozens of minds feverishly brainstorming for months on end.

I can’t wait to see TAKEN evolve over the next few months. (I’m already daydreaming about how it might look on a cover!)

Until then, I’m going to focus on my revisions (which are almost wrapped up), and devour a few good books. Oh, and I’m also going to try to not get startled every time I log into goodreads and see TAKEN sitting where THE LAICOS PROJECT once did. You should do the same.

And if you haven’t added TAKEN to your goodreads shelf yet, maybe you’d like to do that now. *nudge, nudge*

  • http://www.twitter.com/sarahbgoldberg Sarah G.

    Mega congratulations, Erin! Thrilled you have your final title (what a relief it must be!) and that you’re happy with it. If possible, I am even more excited to read it. <3

    • Erin

      More excited? eeek! I hope it lives up to expectations! And thank you for the congrats — I’m so glad to have found The One! :)

      • http://www.twitter.com/sarahbgoldberg Sarah G.

        When Suzie says to me, “OMG THIS BOOK IS AMAZING,” I’m sorry, but I automatically have high expectations. And that’s what she said to me about TAKEN. <– Check out my smooth use of the new title

        • Erin

          I LOVE the smooth use of the new title :) Well played!

          And Suzie’s comments make me soooo happy! Excited and anxious and thrilled and nervous about a high-set bar, but mostly just incredibly happy. I hope you love it as much as her when you finally get your hands on a copy :)

  • Mak

    LOVE IT! Even before reading the rest of your post, I was thinking: Yeah, better. Makes a whole list of questions pop up immediately, and then you want to know- Who? Where? Why? And how do you find out? Well, guess I gotta read the book! And you are right about the original. While I’m sure it made sense in context of the story, it might not hook a potential reader who would look at it and say: Huh?

    It’s good, really good, whoever came up with it!

    • Erin

      Thanks, Mak! Everything you mentioned here is exactly why we moved away from LAICOS and settled on TAKEN! I’m glad it got you asking more questions, and hopefully, it will have the same effect on readers who see it on a shelf.

  • http://carolineinspace.blogspot.com Caroline Tung Richmond

    Yayyyyy! I love TAKEN as a title! And this is a great post too–I love seeing the inner-workings of how a title gets chosen.

    Congrats!

    • Erin

      Thanks, Caroline. :) And happy to share a bit of the process.

  • Rebecca B

    Congrats! And thanks for giving us a peek into the titling process.

    • Erin

      Thank you! And happy to share :)

  • http://unavoidableawkwardness.blogspot.com Laurie Dennison

    Oh, I love it! Congratulations!

    • Erin

      Hooray! Thank you!

  • http://babblingflow.blogspot.com Sara McClung

    Congratulations, I love your new title! And, oh mans, I know you’re not the only author to go through (and survive, yay!) title hell.

    *shoots over to goodreads to make sure it’s on my tbr*

    • Erin

      Thanks, Sara — for the congrats, and for adding to goodreads. I appreciate it!

      And yes, it was definitely a long, draining process. But so worth it :)

  • http://paintingwithw0rds.blogspot.com Iffath

    Taken is a fabulous title! Congratulations! But The Laicos Project was something even more special..

    • Erin

      Thanks! LAICOS will always hold a dear place in my heart, and I think there will be some readers, like you, that gravitate toward it more strongly. The big question is whether those same readers also pick up TAKEN, because if so, we feel confident we can reach more readers with the newer title. Time will tell! :)

  • http://fionawriteson.blogspot.com Fiona Li

    Hooray! That’s wonderful, I LOVE that title!!! So glad you find found one you love. I’m pretty excited for the cover now too. CONGRATS!

    • Erin

      Thanks, Fiona!! I can’t wait for the cover either!

  • http://sarahjmaas.com Sarah J. Maas

    EEEEE!!!! YAY for the official announcement! I know I’ve said it before, but I freaking LOVE the new title! So badass awesome. :D

    Congrats!!!!!!

    • Erin

      Thank you, Sarah!! And you are not the first person today to tell me the new title is “badass.” Haha. So happy to have found such a strong winner :)

  • http://emyshin.com/blog/ Emy Shin

    That’s so exciting! Congratulations on the new title! TAKEN has such an intriguing ring to it. I really love it. :) And I can just imagine how relieved you must be at finally finding the perfect title for it.

    • Erin

      Thanks, Emy. I love the intrigue of this new title, too. I think it’s my favorite part. And yes, I am completely relieved to be done with the process and to have found THE title.

  • http://www.meaganspooner.com Meagan Spooner

    Man, I totally feel your pain about retitling books! As much as I love my new title, it was such a stressful/drawn-out process! Every time someone had a title they loved, someone else on the team would have a problem with it.

    Anyway, I love your new title! Congrats on getting it all sorted out–now you can just focus on stressing about all the other factors! ;)

    • Erin

      Every time someone had a title they loved, someone else on the team would have a problem with it.

      ^ Yes! We had the same thing happen several times over. A title would get really close and then someone would shoot it down. I’m so relieved to have found a winner, and one I truly love, at that!

      Thanks for the congrats, and the same to you on your new title as well. I love SKYLARK!

  • http://www.thewordsonpaper.blogspot.com Tracey Neithercott

    I LOVE it! Seriously Erin I’m dying to read this. Fingers crossed your pub date gets moved up. Yes, I realize that’s selfish of me. ;)

    Thanks for telling us how the process went down. It’s really interesting.

    • Erin

      Thank you, Tracey!! I’m excited for you to read it — terrified, too, but mostly excited! :)

      I’m glad it was interesting to get a peek at the process. Now, let me just see if I can expedite the publishing schedule for you. You know, so you can read it early ;)

  • http://www.ghenetwrites.blogspot.com Ghenet Myrthil

    It’s a great title! I’m sure it’ll entice readers to pick it up. Looking forward to reading it! :)

    • Erin

      Thanks so much, Ghenet!

  • http://jessicalovewrites.blogspot.com Jessica Love

    WOOOO for the new title! It’s awesome!

    • Erin

      Thank you!!

  • http://apriltucholke.com/ April Tucholke

    Goodbye Laicos Project. We’ve had some good times together, you and I and Erin. But it’s time to move on. I wish you the very best.

    • Erin

      Yes, good times indeed. It’s a bit sad to see it go. Bittersweet, really. It’s sort of magical, in a way, that you and me and only a few others will have ever read this book as “LAICOS.”

      • http://apriltucholke.com/ April Tucholke

        It is magical. We’ve got a super elite LAICOS club going on. And I’m damn proud to be a member.

  • http://katyupperman.com Katy Upperman

    So much great information in this post! And the new title… love it! You’re right… very intriguing. And it seems that one-word titles are big right now, so you’re on-trend as usual. :)

    • Erin

      Thanks, Katy! I’ve been wondering if one-word titles might be on their way out…but if so, maybe by the time next winter rolls around they will be BACK in. Who knows. Either way, I love it, and hopefully the world will too ;)

  • http://yahongchi.blogspot.com Yahong

    WOW. So cool to read about the whole titling process — though sorry to hear that it was grueling at times! TAKEN. Hmm, very emphatic, a wee bit vague. Hopefully it’ll grab all the attention it deserves! :D

    • Erin

      Thanks, Yahong! And yes — it is definitely a bit vague, but the strength, boldness, and mystery surrounding the title will hopefully get people to pick it up!

  • Tissa

    I do like taken, but Laicos was a cool title. Different, unique and really not hard to remember the spelling. Sorry you had to changed it. Taken is a good one too. Good luck!